For this learning out come I chose my second peer review. I chose this because I felt I offered the writer of this paper much to think about. Some people peer review and they just slander the whole paper but what this class taught me is to be a good editor. I went through this paper pointing out run ons or misspelled words to help the writer grammatically. I also found some places in this writing that need a little bit more detail.  I would tell the writer that the idea and direction they are going is very good they just need to add more depth to this point. I also point out how their body paragraphs needed better transitions. But I didn’t just go through this paper and point out some of their mistakes I also pointed out how good they were doing at times. Telling them good quote or great point. I feel this class has made me a better editor.

link to peer review https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VGRW8dnYjZ7tmtelrI3sPCi6YwhS0lRGmHtuNEqa4kQ/edit