(Is your analysis fresh?) I repeated information a little bit. Im going to have to fix that. 2. (correctly formatted?) i think it is but I should deferentially double check that. 3. (mla) I need to remember all the parts of that and make sure N got them all. 4.( citations) I still need to add these into my paper.
After reading “shitty first drafts” by Anne Lamotts I realized my first draft is pretty shitty. Honestly I did it the night before it was do because im always so busy so my first draft was not the best piece I have written. I also a a couple words short of the word count I need to add a little more beef into the paper. Another thing I have to do is fix up my grammar. Fixing things such as…
Peer review Austin you did a pretty good job with this paper. You had a lot of good quotes and information in your paper. I would just say make use it is in mla formatting. Also there were some sentences that were worded weirdly or were run ons, but other than a few minor mistakes the paper was pretty solid. Just try to touch up one the little things fix your mla and make sure your in the word count….
Ben Silva English 110 A 9/15/19 Mrs. Emerson Metaphors Metaphors. They have been around since the early 15th century. Metaphors are a figure of speech which help relay a deeper meaning, and can be used to help convey information to others. What does one think about when they hear this word? Many seem to think that they are just silly sayings, that don’t mean very much, but they are much more than that. Many people come up with their own…
Hello everyone my name is Benjamin Silva. I was born in Lafayette Louisiana and came up to Rhode Island when I was very young. I am now attending the University of New England to farther my education and continue playing football.
