https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jRFg9gR6vAZyIZ74QCbBQMZf06hM-nkc3GdqAWySl8s/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aA1OUswW3vbINTuIs3EQDjOmlKSi_-EqUgWc84rJ2RM/edit?usp=sharing

I felt as if one of my biggest jumps in first draft to the final draft was on our final paper. In my draft I only had about two pages worth of content that I was kind of confused about what to do with. I also had a half written multi modal statement. And on top of all of that my paper had a lot of mla errors. Throughout the editing process I made many changes to this paper. I constructed a more clear view of where this paper was heading with a better more efficient topic sentence. I also add more depth to the paper by adding more quotes. I also fixed up my citations added page number and made sure all of my mla stuff was in check. I also added a video, pictures and charts to add depth to my paper as well. I feel as if the jump in quality from my first draft to my final draft shows how far I have come in this class. In the beginning of the year I would just make small adjustments to my papers and as time as gone by my edits to my first drafts and gotten better and better making my papers better and better.