After reading “shitty first drafts” by Anne Lamotts I realized my first draft is pretty shitty. Honestly I did it the night before it was do because im always so busy so my first draft was not the best piece I have written. I also a a couple words short of the word count I need to add a little more beef into the paper. Another thing I have to do is fix up my grammar. Fixing things such as commas and things of that nature. other then that I feel my first draft was pretty decent for a first draft.