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Austin you did a pretty good job with this paper. You had a lot of good quotes and information in your paper. I would just say make use it is in mla formatting. Also there were some sentences that were worded weirdly or were run ons, but other than a few minor mistakes the paper was pretty solid. Just try to touch up one the little things fix your mla and make sure your in the word count. If you have some room to add I would touch up on like one or two places that could use a little more explaining. But as a said before just a few minor touch ups and this paper is looking good.


